I made the two inside panels of the brochure, I drew a straight gray line down the middle to demonstrate the fold.

My concerns
1.) It folds through the text on the bottom. I know it will still be readable, but maybe that's still not okay.
2.) There is too much going on for a viewer. To me, all the activity on the page is good because it mimics the Skate Escape feel (fun, active, etc) Although there is a lot going on, it reads easy to me. I worry it may not read as easily to others.